13 January 2010

Facebook update poem

Top status
today
loves
writing
must
people
new
where
never
kill
fight
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Update
my today
with love
and writing
you must
you must
people
love new
and where
you can
never kill
but fight
fight and push
the living
breathing
lovely
rage

6 comments:

plishk said...

hmmmm, i like this.

cara said...

oh yes!
I like the possibilities.

jc said...

yes...yes...yessssss.

micro said...

Argh! I want to post now. Can I get an invite please?

(word verification "bring")

plishk said...

substitution:

Update
my writing
with reading
and here's mae
here's dru
you kids
you kids
this house

love art
and james (and)
you kids
you kids!

you can, really
NOW! GO!
with kids,
you kids

but tonight,
tonight is to push
the living
breathing
lovely
rage

with kids
you kids
dreaming me

c-dog said...

Nice!