BETA: this morning

11 January 2012

this morning

you are a bright pink blur
as you move accross the soft white snow
trudging to school
and I sit at the window and watch you
with the cat
waiting to pounce
at any moment

4 comments:

anita said...: very zen. i like it.; January 11, 2012 at 11:09 p.m.
lr said...: word verif: zoodings; January 11, 2012 at 11:10 p.m.
lr said...: i find it angsty more than zen. it's not clear who's waiting to pounce-- the narrator, the cat, or maybe both.; January 13, 2012 at 5:31 p.m.
lr said...: word verif: tomshe.; January 13, 2012 at 5:32 p.m.