21 September 2010

Flight 5

one man talked
while another man opened
windows for us to
see, roaring through
the concrete jungle,
like darkness bequeathed
to sky and princess,
as giants and g-ds
fight for a myth
we would all forget

2 comments:

cara said...

I like this.
Magical!

Lorne Roberts said...

i like all of these.

maybe in the last one mis-hits instead of mishits? it makes me think of half-poos when i read it.

i really like all of these though. nice contrast between concrete and abstract.

verif: rairal