15 February 2011

mighty

at the battle of known,
in the land of maybe:

dueling shoulds and coulds
swallowed whole
the wanting ifs
trenched between ever and how
vulnerable foil
to never and now.
at

3 comments:

  1. c-dogFebruary 16, 2011 at 6:49 a.m.

    Very nice.

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  2. Lorne RobertsFebruary 16, 2011 at 7:59 p.m.

    i like how that militaristic theme continues all the way through.

    the 3rd last line is my fave, but the last 3 tie the whole piece up nicely.

    bienfait!

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  3. caraFebruary 19, 2011 at 9:10 a.m.

    "the wanting ifs"

    I really like that line

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