strange things of magic could be because night-time and rain of traffic luminous through our edges, a thin yellow skin of rain falling we can see that he's yelling out his features--a man somewhere yelling something still, and now
something i learned in a writing class once was that if you use a negative image to describe something, the reader will almost inevitably misunderstand.
i.e., if you say "the moon wasn't shining" to describe darkness, the image the reader maintains isn't darkness, but is actually that of the moon shining, since that's what you've described or given action/animation to.
so when your comment on a work is "yawn", that's almost inevitably going to be misunderstood and taken in a negative sense.
strange things of magic could be
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of traffic luminous through our
edges, a thin yellow skin of
rain falling
we can see that he's yelling
out his features--a man somewhere
yelling something still, and now
cool photo. "accidental" art.
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something i learned in a writing class once was that if you use a negative image to describe something, the reader will almost inevitably misunderstand.
ReplyDeletei.e., if you say "the moon wasn't shining" to describe darkness, the image the reader maintains isn't darkness, but is actually that of the moon shining, since that's what you've described or given action/animation to.
so when your comment on a work is "yawn", that's almost inevitably going to be misunderstood and taken in a negative sense.
I'm just happy you're posting. More posts. F-ck Knackerson.
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