02 January 2011

all signs point

prophecy sought
in the physics of the quest,
bound by rules made

to fuel the know/ feel duel
struggling for the perfect moment, to be
imperfect in the moment

when beauty is vulnerability
unwrought by an old soul,
with a new start.
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2 comments:

  1. c-old/newJanuary 2, 2011 at 7:42 a.m.

    nice

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  2. jcJanuary 2, 2011 at 8:19 a.m.

    yep, I agree, very nice. a little disjointed at the start, but I think that makes me like it. that last stanza is perfect.

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