21 September 2010

Flight 5

one man talked
while another man opened
windows for us to
see, roaring through
the concrete jungle,
like darkness bequeathed
to sky and princess,
as giants and g-ds
fight for a myth
we would all forget
at

2 comments:

  1. caraSeptember 21, 2010 at 11:27 p.m.

    I like this.
    Magical!

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  2. Lorne RobertsSeptember 22, 2010 at 10:00 p.m.

    i like all of these.

    maybe in the last one mis-hits instead of mishits? it makes me think of half-poos when i read it.

    i really like all of these though. nice contrast between concrete and abstract.

    verif: rairal

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