13 January 2010

Facebook update poem

Top status
today
loves
writing
must
people
new
where
never
kill
fight
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Update
my today
with love
and writing
you must
you must
people
love new
and where
you can
never kill
but fight
fight and push
the living
breathing
lovely
rage
at

6 comments:

  1. plishkJanuary 13, 2010 at 9:11 a.m.

    hmmmm, i like this.

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  2. caraJanuary 13, 2010 at 10:05 a.m.

    oh yes!
    I like the possibilities.

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  3. jcJanuary 13, 2010 at 11:10 a.m.

    yes...yes...yessssss.

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  4. microJanuary 13, 2010 at 2:05 p.m.

    Argh! I want to post now. Can I get an invite please?

    (word verification "bring")

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  5. plishkJanuary 14, 2010 at 10:11 a.m.

    substitution:

    Update
    my writing
    with reading
    and here's mae
    here's dru
    you kids
    you kids
    this house

    love art
    and james (and)
    you kids
    you kids!

    you can, really
    NOW! GO!
    with kids,
    you kids

    but tonight,
    tonight is to push
    the living
    breathing
    lovely
    rage

    with kids
    you kids
    dreaming me

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  6. c-dogJanuary 14, 2010 at 10:45 a.m.

    Nice!

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